River Man Storyboards Refined P1

As I was told to change some aspects of my story, I have spent a little while on the first instance of the film before RM makes an appearance. But as I have also been ill recently, I haven't done as much as I would have liked, but this will give me a chance to ask some questions regarding some ideas I have for the ending (which will also be changed). However, here are the first panels for River Man.

View of bridge with man standing on it.

Man looks at photograph.

View of photograph.

Tears up photograph.

Throws pieces into river.

Looks down at ring on finger.

Starts pulling it off.

Looks at ring.

Clenches fist.

Reels back.

Throws ring into river.

Starts walking off sad.

Ring mysteriously comes back up.

Man hears the ring land (clink)

Turns round.

Ring on bridge.

Confused.

Walks over to it.

Picks up ring.

Looks at ring.

Looks towards river.

Ring is thrown back into the river.

Man looks over.